that was awful
It was terrible, but I'm not going to say "Omg u sux" because you told me not to. Instead, I will "Give you Advice"
Don't submit to newgrounds yet. Learn flash, get used to the tools, don't use sprites, if you want to make a good flash, draw everything yourself. I garuntee this will help a lot. If you can't voice act/don't have a microphone, please don't. If you need voice acting, get other better voice actors to do it for you.
If you can't draw, don't just decide to use sprites, try to learn. Nobody was born as an amazing artist, they just decided to practace. Also, in flash movies, if you do have talking, please don't just use text, it is a huge pain for the viewer.
Also, don't put in pain in the ass giant sound files, because it takes forever to load, and makes you look like a retard if your flash isn't really long.
And don't do the "to be continued" thing either.
Yeah, that's it. If you actually listen to this post, you shouldn't have any trouble making a good flash movie sometime withing the next 3 or 4 months.
Good luck